This topic is dedicated to the Brathair Prasgan member Lhorkan and will contain most of the information about him.


IN THE PROCESS OF SPELL CHECKING AND EDITING

Personal:

Real Name: Thomas van den Berge
Age: 14
Location: Belguim
Interests: N/A
School Level: 9th grade in High School, studying sciences
Years playing mmrpgs: 0
MSN: N/A
Words of Wisdom: N/A

History of Lhorkans endevors with the Brathair Prasgan:

Lhorkan first started out with the Disciples of Ares, which was later renamed to Legio Leonis, and participated actively throughout its reign. When it became apparent that this clan was falling apart he, amongst some other members, left the guild and started up the Brathair Prasgan. Before the decline of Legio Leonis he worked on an FMV for the clan, but was unfinished due to the clans abrupt end. Though at times quiet he has provided many adaptations to the ideas put forth by other members. Lhorkan has always supported the members of his clans and is content with being a regular member, as he has never tried out for any of the positions of power.

Characters:

Name: Lhorkan
Age: 18-20
Sex: Male
Occupation: Blacksmith


History of Lhorkan's Character (fictional):

I have thought of a new direction to take character history (see Kaso) and as such this will likely be redone... DAMN! O well, shit happens anyways do to keeping my sanity this entery (ie the paragraphs below) will just be shuffled further down under the heading 'old Lhokan history'. Thanks for you time, Xeno.

In production :lol:



Old Lhorkan History:

Lhorkan was born and raised in the small village of Willow's Creek in Austria. Here he trained, under the tutalege of his father, Berdon, to become a blacksmith. For generations the (last name) family where the main distruibuters of weapons and armor for the local lord's troops.

When Lhorkan was three years old war erupted between King Manolesus and Caesar Orelious. During one fateful spring night, a roman legion attacked Willows Creek and their way to Barrens Claw, a major city withen Manolesus's kingdom. The romans spared none as they worked their way through his village killing the old and the children. The city was abalze when Lhorkan's father awoke. Grabbing his axe by the bed he commanded his wife to take Lhorkan to the cellar. Just then three legionaires burst through the door. Wielding his large double edged axe, Berdon swung, with his tendions taunt, and embedded his axe into the unknowning romans skull. Shock passed across the face of the two remaining romans, whom quickly charged the giant man. Berdon ripes the axe out of the skull and uses the momentum to whip it around and catch the second roman in the chest. Dropping the axe he charges and grapples the thrid romans sword arm. Toppling to the floor Berdon fails to realize two more roman troops have stormed the house and is spited in the back as he strangled the toppled roman. A shrill shriek pierces the air as Lhorkan's mother is grabbed by more romans who have entered through the back door. With their prize in hand they leave and torch the tatched roof of the smithy. Barely breathing Berdon slowly pushes himself up from the roman corpse and trys to collect his scrambled thoughts. A memory pushes through, the shriek that must have emonated from his wifes mouth. Questing through the smoking house he comes upon his son whom had been tossed aside with a horrible slash across the face. Picking him up he wearly makes his way to the cellar and locks the door. Two days later he emerges to find the blackened, broken walls of his smithy, his heart.

Years later when Lhorkan was 12, he showed remarkable talent at feeling out the grain of the metal and crafting it into deadly works of war. This made his father, Berdon envenous, and even jealous. At first Berdon had tried to learn this technique, but it soon became apparent to him that not only he could not do it but also that his son was going to match him and soon. One evening Berdon demanded Lhorkan to instruct him on how to feel the grain, unfortunatly Lhorkan said is was something he could not teach. Berdon misinterpeted Lhorkan's meaning and though he was saying he would not teach him. Berdon went red with rage struck him with such a force that Lhorkan was barely consious. At that moment his father disowned him and tossed him out into rebuilt the street of Willow's Creek.

Unable to find a job because of his disfiguring scare Lhorkan moved to the near by city of Barrens Claw and had to take up the shady business of a pick pocket in order to buy his food. One day he saw a forge and its forge master working a piece of metal. A hunger to feel out the metal, to mold it sprang anew and, despite his will, he found himself walking over to the forge. In grossed with his busness the forge master didn't noticed Lhorkan at first. When he looked up he saw Lhorkan, who was watching from three paces away. He asked him if he could help him, ignoring the scare that had shunned Lhorkan his whole life. Lhorkan replyed that he was just remembering the time he was an apperentice at a smithy. A silence stretched as both men watched each other. Finally the forge master said, "You used to be an appertence, right? Well... I have lost a man three moons ago to a sickness, are you looking for a job?"
Overwelmed at not only the fact that the man hadn't tried to chase him out of his shop but offered him a legit job working at the place he felt was home, he offered a simple, shaky, "Yes."
"Well," the forge master said, "You can start on the marrow, oh by the way I am Hank."
A smile of knowing crossed Lhorkan's face, this is where his future will be made.

Here is a picture, made by Lhorkan, of his Character

Wow that took a long time ( 4 hours for the rough).

Right now I am editing it, as well as, adding new information.

Lhorkan if you could post the information that has N/A by it for me, I will update it.

I inserted the harmless information known to me for you -- Mordhak

Thanks, See pinned topic for the rest. -- Xenophon

The guy is lacking jaw structure...

I suggest you make a better face then.

I made that a long time ago. And yes, as Mordhak proposed, go buy Lightwave, make a better face and show it. I can't wait so see it. :smash And BTW, that face is made with the face of an ordinary human in the background. Plus, this it TOTALLY OFF TOPIC. At least you could've mentioned what you thought of the story.

I'll go read the story right away... I'll edit when I'm ready. ^_^

EDIT: Nice one Xeno. You can change all the (name)'s to Lhorkan, since Lhorkan's the name of my character. :P

EDIT: Understood, I wasen't sure if you where going to name him something different. Xeno

It's a good model, but i think the eyes are a bit too much of a bright blue for Austrians, IMHO.

Anyway, it's a good story, though I would suggest using a German name for the town of birth instead of an Anglisized name. But that's just my opinion.
Danke
-Capo

You know Capo I was thinking the same thing but I none would come to mind when I was writing. I put those in and was going to try and find the german translation... but I got bored and played CoD instead :P

Graz, Innsbruck, Lech, Salzburg, Hollabrun, Linz.

Thanks, I will choose one these then.

Some more editing, pretty minor stuff though. This will be an ongoing work though, so check every so often to see if anything new has been added.

I'm curious about this, but are you doing these member profiles in random order?

Think so.

I should start giving my story some consideration...."Not that long ago in a shoddy,miss measured building two men sit playing bingo.....fed up with playing bingo Nulli asks his mysterious bingo partner Xenophon about this new guild....."

Or something as such, I'm not the story writing type.

Random Order? No, I am doing them in the order in which I recieve them. I got Lhorkans then Kaso's, so I did Lhorkans and Kaso's. That said no one else has given me their info (probably because they are to lazy to type it) so I will do mine next (after I do Lhorkan's again).

Great Profile you did XenO! .... and congrats to the history tooo ... Its better then KAso's ... though I'm not in all that dialect stuff. :D .... Me like story :sensei

That reminds me, I need to try and finish mine. I had asked Xeno to make my history out of real events rather than making up a bunch of crap. What he posted took him like 4 hours to make so he didn't finish it. I'm gonna go work on it I think.

Ya, I have been kinda neglecting the member profiles because of how long it takes (that and because no one has the balls to pm their information).

That said, I think I will leave Lhorkans and spend my time elsewhere. If you truelly want it like Kaso's Lhorkan then pm me and I will work on it some time in the future. On that note I will do everyone from here on like Kaso's as I think it is both more professional and cooler since when I am done each profile will interact with another (due to the events the members have participated in).

I'll get mine done boss, just give me the time and it'll get done.

After this commerce essay/project I'll work on mine.

Yes I understand that most of you have exams right now, so no rush. I would also like to point out that instead of working july and august, and I also now working june. This means (because of my eight hours shifts) I will not have as much time to spend on these guys, so... they will slow to finish. Though my goal is to have everyone's profile finished by the end of july (that may seem a long time, but at a 4 hour min each, this due date may have to be postponed :( )

Also the sooner you get those bad boys in, the early I can finish them.